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WinterCalvino
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This is so amazing! My favourite is this line from the thrid stanza:

"Whereupon higher branches, the raven screams

Nature’s politician, with votes on world domination,

Next to the owl, the supreme court, judge of sinners." 

 

I also love the pace and rhythm that builds throughout the poem that felt like it was imitating the rush of taking in the beauty and uniqueness of the animals + mythological creatures you describe. You also use the most beautiful words to convey a very rich visual image for the reader. Overall, I love this so much, its honestly such a beautiful poem and thank you for sharing it! Would love for you to post more in the future 🙂

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